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CH13P1

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  1. Put the letter of the character you wanna see in the comments to cast your vote!

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  2. that is one Very Comfortable lookin snooze there hannah 😏😏😏 we all would if we could to be fair lol.

    i vote for D….. i love her vibe 🀩

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  3. Hannah knows what’s up and how to take a good nap! lol
    Seeing the Yonique staff in one room together is so cool! (Ballroom night is going to slap, I just know it!!)
    Also, I vote C!

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  4. THERES SO MUCH I LOVE HERE AFIWHWEFIKNFKS I will write more coherently later but until then kissing this whole page!!!!

    1. Ok words have been cohered.

      First: So happy to see Ruth and Nelly again!!!! And in such awesome outfits too!!! They have no right to be so compelling when we’ve only seen them a few times chapters (YEARS) ago! We love to see cool older butches!!!

      Second: Everyone’s outfits! Again Ruth and Nelly looking so snazzy! But I also love how comfy Violet and Hannah are. Love the flowy flowery dress/purple jacket combo on that one lady. And DON’T get me STARTED on the goth chick!!!

      Third: PARNIYA! God I’ve been looking forward to hearing more about her and what happened to her hand. I hope we will find out soon ;o;. I hope she got to help decorate for ballroom night as compensation for the stress lol.

      Forth: ALL OF THESE NEW LADIES. Ok yes obviously I’m per-disposed to lock on to the goth chick, especially one so expressive in her outfits. But I can not WAIT to learn about all of them. I need their stories and their interpersonal relationships.

      I’m compelled by the lady in the dress since most of the women at Yonique are butch/got a more masc sense of fashion/whatever you call it. The odd one out always draws attention like that lol.

      And Murphy!!! One what a great name but two I love her fit and her look and her fucking sports team!!! Am I right to guess her ex was the old bouncer who kept calling in sick? And am I right to hope she may run into Clancey and give her a fun space to play ball and be herself in? Using her build to stall is already so <3 <3 <3

      But also means I need to know where her and the rest of the newbies fit on the looks like they can kill you/actually a cinnamon roll chart. Then of course Hannah has already wormed her way into my heart on the count of being a sleepyhead like myself. Give that girl a double shot espresso latte STAT! Her and Murphy both already looking so soft like, texture wise. Like they both look like they'd be fun to lean against and nap on.

      Fifth: Just the general comradery and teamwork being introduced here. A bunch of old faces and new faces but we already know they're all working together for a common goal! And a good one at that! Nice to see depictions of a bunch of different women in a unified front, especially with the desire to protect each other!

      Sorry to ramble and word salad so much at you this is just such a phenomenal page update! For me!!

      1. All of this and I didn’t even vote smfh A!!!!

      2. Never apologize for rambling, queen. It’s like a shot of motivation right into my arm πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

        First: feels great to be drawing Nelly and Ruth again! Especially giving some time to properly bring Nelly into the fold and show where she fits into Yonique.

        Second: thank youuuu! I’m really happy with how they turned out and enjoyed adapting them to my limited purple-y colour pallet. I figure the uniform policy is pretty lax, just practical for the task and predominantly purple/black/white in colour.
         

        Third: ooooh I could definitely see Parniya enjoying the decoration process of Yonique for various themed nights!
        What happened to her hand has absolutely been written. Finding out quite where to place that information in the story hasn’t come to me yet though! Stay tuned~

        Forth: Hope the new ladies don’t disappoint! It feels great to bring them into the fold after having designed them so long ago!! 2021ish geez!!

        Re: Murphy’s fiancee’, she has not appeared. Lucy’s (woman who kept calling in sick) girlfriend was the one in the glasses taking the picture with her.

        Fifth: Yess. It’s been a blast developing the team dynamics later in the chapter. So excited for you ladies to see it.

        Thank you again so much for the lovely long comment. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

  5. “balroom nights open in an hour” Oh noeees here comes trouble

  6. Oooh! Looks like we’re getting a look at tons of new characters, I’m hype. Lovely to see that Murphy is in the same soccer group as Clancy, too – here’s hoping that’ll be her foot in the door for making some decent friends.

    Feels really weird to be mentioning the AGP gang again after so ong, for all the fuss they caused the gendies back in the day I’d almost forgotten they existed.

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    1. Oh, if only such types WOULD let people forget. I liked the mention of looking for the infamous trio on the Internet, although I would’ve looked in more places (including places where we have spies in their communities), but that is based on personal experiences.

      Is it just me, or D looks like she knows something or has guilt/concerns?
      Maybe just reflecting on everything, but I’m curious.
      I would have picked Hannah (A), but I’d like another clue on D, so I chose her.

      Coloring, angles, and emphasis on point in the paneling. Very smart to set up the audience with a snapshot of our crew for the evening before the β€œrumble” starts. Fantastic additional page to the story!

      Note – I did ask to be added to the mailing list, but did not receive a notification. I will check the β€œYes, add me to your mailing list” box again for good measure. Then again, the website doesn’t seem to save my Name & Email when I comment although I do check that box as well.

    2. Honestly love that they got forgotten 🀣
      Hope you enjoy what is to come πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

  7. I’m so excited, I feel the drama coming. Please show us Ms D!

  8. Parniya’s biggest fan (and wife)

    AHHHH MY WIFE! I hope her arm is ok, I know Parns is a tough woman due to having so many brothers, but I hope she knows it’s ok to mention pain. I’m also voting for D, she looks very upset… I’m suspicious that she MAY be a secret gendie who her gendie friends pat on the back for β€œnot being out yet” but I could be wrong so I’m curious to hear her story. Hope I’m wrong lol. Love this page! Excited to see the rest of the staff and finally get to see more Parniya! Oh waitress! Waitress! More Parns please πŸ™‚

    1. You have been so patient queen, hope it is everything you wanted. Parns will be coming back real soon πŸ«‚

      Very interesting guesses as well! 🀐🀐

  9. Oh I love two things – the isometric panel works so nice with your style, also every time you draw ruth with the arms-crossed head-down tsundere look lol

    Also I vote D

    1. Thank you!! I am such a fan of isometric style art, especially pixel art. Could look at it for hours! Was very fun implementing it into this panel. You definitely haven’t seen the last of it πŸ˜…

      Love Ruth being assigned tsundere too!

  10. I vote for D!! Let’s go alternative lesbians!!! I didn’t expect these ladies to be staff…I think gingersnap is like a bartender or cook? (do they serve food in Yonique?) But the rest….is a little hard to pinpoint. either way AAAAAAA I’m excited. I need to see it, neeeeeeeed it.

    PS. Rusty if you keep drawing these buff ladies with big ol chests you and me are gonna have a talk cause-nnnnnnnnnnn

    1. I am so sorry for any inconvenience the buff, busty women have caused you, Ms. Clicker πŸ™ If you follow me we can discuss it further in the new complaints department. Right this way:

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      1. Words cannot describe how my lesbian heart feels about this XD

        1. Happy to provide, queen πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

      2. LET ME IIIIIINN LET ME IIIIIIIIN

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    Ahh! Nelly and Ruth are both rocking suspenders and ties and look so adorable together. I’m kind of starting to ship it tbh. I’m willing to give up on my crush on Nelly for the greater good if need be.

    I’m going to be the odd woman out and vote A for Hannah’s profile. Sure, the others are cute, but we already have her name, so why not get to know more about her while we’re at it?

    1. ✍️✍️matching outfits = higher shippabilty✍️✍️

  12. A please! Love a cute sleepy woman who uses her coworker as a boob pillow lol very happy we get to see new characters already!
    Despite the dread I have for this chapter I’m happy we get to see more cool women ehe

    1. Just keep looking at the cool new women, it’ll all be fiiiiine πŸ«‚πŸ«‚

  13. Antiyourwokehomophobia2

    After reading Murphys cast page: JUST a friendship with Hannah? πŸ‘€ And oh god, I wanna hear her story with why she broke up with her fiancΓ© (I’m also dealing with a break up so call me biased) and I wanna know D’s story so bad. She looks so cool and I really like your artsyle. It has truly gotten so pretty over time!!

    1. BASED comment right here I need to know about Murphy’s fiance and punk girl nooooooow

    2. Big condolences on your break up, that’s never easy πŸ«‚ Hope you’re taking time for yourself to process it, and that you enjoy what I’ve got in store πŸ₯°
      &ENSP;
      Murphy and Hannah are indeed just friends, gosh what would make you think otherwise 😀😀

  14. A! Love her design!

  15. Parniya so tall… Murphy so handsome…what was the question again…oh right. I vote A 😁

    1. You’re doing so well, breastie πŸ₯°

  16. This will surely go over well. Babygiwl will totally not show up and throw a fit when he’s denied entry.
    Voting for D, she looks cool but I’m curious if her expression is hiding something.

    1. Definitely not! For real! For sure! Promise! πŸ™‚

  17. Oh its coming up closer than I expected! I vote for D, curious about the expression on her face here. Also, I know shes such a minor character but I hope Clancy gets a moment with Murphy or really any lesbian woman to detangle what the Q club has done to her identity.

    1. Very understandable! Hope you enjoy what’s to come πŸ₯°

  18. aaa the yonique crew continues to b my favorite! i vote for A, bc i am also frequently sleepy + thus vibe w her

    1. Sleepy women unite!!

  19. Your local tortoiseshell cat

    I’m voting for D, but as others have said, I’m very curious to learn more about everyone here!

    Per existing details on the FAQ page, I hadn’t mentioned requests for providing overly specific kinds of representation, but I’m absolutely glad to see Murphy as a bisexual woman who’s involved in the Yonique community (and the prioritization of women that comes along with that), along with being gender non-conforming in the same way as a lot of the main lesbian characters, without adopting a gender identity.

    1. So glad to see such a warm reception to the new ladies already!

      Also happy you’re digging Murphy so far. Definitely agree re: having some tomboy bisexuals. Exactly what I was going for with Murphy and another one of the new ladies who is also bisexual.

  20. I vote A! I want to know more about Hannah :]

  21. Your local tortoiseshell cat

    Also, I know I already voted for D, but I realized separately that I’m especially excited to see her outfit for ballroom night! I’m stating for the record that my current guess is a black-and-red suit ensemble with some vampire vibes, maybe specifically some gothic ouji influence in there, but I know that even if my guess is wrong, the results will be stunning!

    In general, I’m looking forward to all sorts of dapper ballroom outfits!

    1. You can definitely look forward to some fun outfits for the actual Masquerade Ballroom Night. For the lesson (which is happening this chapter) staff are just wearing what they’re already wearing tho.

  22. Parniya is soooo tall and cool

  23. I’m voting for D, because I love her whole punk girl look! Reminds me of riot grrrl culture ❀️

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