Your visual story-telling is phenomenal! And just your overall improvement is crazy
anon
19 November 2021 10:28 AM
oh wow, this page was very emotional.. poor jaden, i hope she doesnt blame herself π₯²
Emma
24 November 2021 12:14 PM
The Happy Potter pencil holder knocked over in the last panel, looking just as tired and defeated as Jaden… :'(
Also, the lighting in that first panel is so pretty!! Like rays of hope shining through the windows.
anonymoo
1 December 2021 3:13 AM
love how you illustrated the progression of time with different lighting each day, as well as the panels shrinking as the situation gets more dire. really well done!
Dunno
20 May 2024 8:28 AM
Wait, does her insecurity around not being able to protect people come from not being able to save her dad?
Your visual story-telling is phenomenal! And just your overall improvement is crazy
oh wow, this page was very emotional.. poor jaden, i hope she doesnt blame herself π₯²
The Happy Potter pencil holder knocked over in the last panel, looking just as tired and defeated as Jaden… :'(
Also, the lighting in that first panel is so pretty!! Like rays of hope shining through the windows.
love how you illustrated the progression of time with different lighting each day, as well as the panels shrinking as the situation gets more dire. really well done!
Wait, does her insecurity around not being able to protect people come from not being able to save her dad?
Poor Jaden, she’s working so hard π₯Ίπ