i like the details like the car headlights casting long shadows on the rocks. how foreboding it feels to be exposed in the light like that, with the long shadow looming over
but also
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
These pages feel like they have higher stakes than whenever you watch a superhero movie and some guy threatens to end the world.
Thank you 🥰🥰
I think the difference between this and world-ending super hero threats, is the scale of threat is quantifiable, immediate and threatening someone readers care about VS so massive it’s hard to comprehend in your head, vague/cliche in nature, happening to many faceless characters readers don’t know.
The way he nonchalantly stands over her… I’m the least maternal woman you’ll ever meet but if I saw even a random toddler in the middle of the road at night I’d be freaked, running to them, picking them up and checking they were ok, and this is his kid! Dude sounds like a farmer who’s just found a member of his livestock outside the fence 🫤
Is this the part where Shez kills him? I know it’s hard for a child to do and it may be cruel for me to say “come on Shez do this hard thing!” but MAKE HIM DIE
Also, I used to live in a large rural plot, and if my mom ever found a toddler (least of all a family member) randomly far out on the land, she would not be as calm as that. What’s going on in that head of his? Nothing in his heart.
Chris hadn’t realized at that moment, he was about to breath his last breath. For Shez’s secret saiyan powers were finally charged up, ready to blast him into smithereens.
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this chris should drown in piss
i like the details like the car headlights casting long shadows on the rocks. how foreboding it feels to be exposed in the light like that, with the long shadow looming over
but also
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
These pages feel like they have higher stakes than whenever you watch a superhero movie and some guy threatens to end the world.
rustyhearts
Thank you 🥰🥰
I think the difference between this and world-ending super hero threats, is the scale of threat is quantifiable, immediate and threatening someone readers care about VS so massive it’s hard to comprehend in your head, vague/cliche in nature, happening to many faceless characters readers don’t know.
Tyto
AHHHHHHHHHHH
Jay
The way he nonchalantly stands over her… I’m the least maternal woman you’ll ever meet but if I saw even a random toddler in the middle of the road at night I’d be freaked, running to them, picking them up and checking they were ok, and this is his kid! Dude sounds like a farmer who’s just found a member of his livestock outside the fence 🫤
Blais
Is this the part where Shez kills him? I know it’s hard for a child to do and it may be cruel for me to say “come on Shez do this hard thing!” but MAKE HIM DIE
Also, I used to live in a large rural plot, and if my mom ever found a toddler (least of all a family member) randomly far out on the land, she would not be as calm as that. What’s going on in that head of his? Nothing in his heart.
Nonnie
Chris: so my wife and kids tried to ran away even if I gave them all my love to them! They’re so cruel to ME!
probably.
rustyhearts
Definitely 😔
rustyhearts
Chris probably: how did my property get out here. This is inconvenient.
anonymoo
The last panel is designed so well, this is scary af. Only women understand real horror.
rustyhearts
Thank you, I’m VERY proud of this one 🥰🥰
shez fucking kills chris
Chris hadn’t realized at that moment, he was about to breath his last breath. For Shez’s secret saiyan powers were finally charged up, ready to blast him into smithereens.
K
Incredibly well-done page but I hate everything about this.
rustyhearts
I completely understand 😔
Parniya’s biggest fan
Oh hell no…
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