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CH12P25
Posted on 12 January 2024 by rustyhearts

14 thoughts on “CH12P25”

  1. this chris should drown in piss

    i like the details like the car headlights casting long shadows on the rocks. how foreboding it feels to be exposed in the light like that, with the long shadow looming over
     

    but also
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
     
    These pages feel like they have higher stakes than whenever you watch a superhero movie and some guy threatens to end the world.

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    1. rustyhearts

      Thank you 🥰🥰
      I think the difference between this and world-ending super hero threats, is the scale of threat is quantifiable, immediate and threatening someone readers care about VS so massive it’s hard to comprehend in your head, vague/cliche in nature, happening to many faceless characters readers don’t know.

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  2. Tyto

    AHHHHHHHHHHH

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  3. Jay

    The way he nonchalantly stands over her… I’m the least maternal woman you’ll ever meet but if I saw even a random toddler in the middle of the road at night I’d be freaked, running to them, picking them up and checking they were ok, and this is his kid! Dude sounds like a farmer who’s just found a member of his livestock outside the fence 🫤

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  4. Blais

    Is this the part where Shez kills him? I know it’s hard for a child to do and it may be cruel for me to say “come on Shez do this hard thing!” but MAKE HIM DIE
     
    Also, I used to live in a large rural plot, and if my mom ever found a toddler (least of all a family member) randomly far out on the land, she would not be as calm as that. What’s going on in that head of his? Nothing in his heart.

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    1. Nonnie

      Chris: so my wife and kids tried to ran away even if I gave them all my love to them! They’re so cruel to ME!

      probably.

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      1. rustyhearts

        Definitely 😔

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    2. rustyhearts

      Chris probably: how did my property get out here. This is inconvenient.

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  5. anonymoo

    The last panel is designed so well, this is scary af. Only women understand real horror.

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    1. rustyhearts

      Thank you, I’m VERY proud of this one 🥰🥰

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  6. shez fucking kills chris

    Chris hadn’t realized at that moment, he was about to breath his last breath. For Shez’s secret saiyan powers were finally charged up, ready to blast him into smithereens.

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  7. K

    Incredibly well-done page but I hate everything about this.

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    1. rustyhearts

      I completely understand 😔

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  8. Parniya’s biggest fan

    Oh hell no…

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