Oh dear… I feel bad for Rissa. I’m not at all pleased with how the boyfriend is in a position of power over her at work, but I can also totally understand her own feelings, her desire for autonomy, and her want to move on from the horrible stuff that happened to the family.
Shez and Meriam both being attracted to women and therefore having options who aren’t shitty men is an extra level of frustration, too – “Romance for me but not for thee” is going to be a hard sell.
Much happier to see this page, though! Shez is so cool, and I love how much she and Jaden cherish and support each other.
Kory
5 May 2024 11:13 PM
NOW KISS
Shez Appreciator
6 May 2024 12:27 AM
I love that Shez’s silhouette here kinda echoes the image of teenage Shez when she first decides she has to kill Chris…the unwavering commitment to completely justified murder ❤️
Norm L. Esbian
6 May 2024 2:22 AM
Man, Rissa’s profile… It’s crazy how women do have the actions of men define them. Like… the no men allowed rule isn’t a reflection on you and your past, girl. It’s a reflection on the behaviors and actions of men— you’re not responsible for that.
But also yeah @ him being in a position of power over her, and the dark irony of her insisting he’s different from Chr*s while him… literally being like him, lol. Her in a lower paying/skilled job and him having a literal job with sway over her. Fucked!!
But also oh Shez… this makes me so sad. 😔 My dark fear theory is that the story will split in conflict, and Yonique and her staff will be taking action to try to help Shez and her family be safe from/deal with the moid, while the “QTs” are trying to get Yonique shut down for being “exclusionary” as a parallel to the women’s shelters that have gone through that irl, but maybe i’m wrong (i hope i am,,,,,)
Anon
6 May 2024 3:44 AM
You got a video review about your comic on YouTube by a KenCarsonfan42
✂️🍆
6 May 2024 4:48 AM
If Shez needs an alibi, I’m here for her. Pretty sure Jaden is, too, by that smile.
BlackSwallowtail
6 May 2024 7:45 AM
AND FEED HIM TO CROCS AND/OR DINGOS!
Nonnie
6 May 2024 9:20 AM
Shez, you have my sword, and my Bow, and my Axe if Chris dare to get oxygen in this comic.
Alice
6 May 2024 7:23 PM
Oh no Shez please be careful.
Love the colours on this page Rusty.
Crypty
6 May 2024 9:09 PM
Maybe it’s the horror fan in me but the more homicidal Shez is/sounds the more I love her 😭😭😭💚💚💚🔥😳😳 hmmm I guess the random flame emoji is chris body when shes done with him!
And man I feel for Rissa 🙁 so far the one I’d say is most like the response I’d have. The Just Wanna Move On take, even if she doesnt quite understand her mom’s rule. Baby girl should NOT be with a frickin doctor rn tho she should LITERALLY be at the club. Or learning to use one.
Sunny
6 May 2024 11:59 PM
That pure unadulterated rage in Shez’s eyes is so delicious.
YES Ma’am! He better prays you don’t find him!!
And Jaden’s supportive smile 😭She gets it!
Lesbians for Shez
7 May 2024 5:51 AM
Chris’s whole world is gonna be a horror movie once he gets out. I’m all here for Shez hunting Chris down like he’s a walking target. All she needs now is an axe!
Thankfully, Rissa has someone who would be willing to hunt someone down if anyone dares to hurt her family. If that boyfriend does anything shady, it won’t be fun for him lol.
👀
8 May 2024 5:59 AM
Watch out Chris, even if you get out Shamzey’s gonn–Wait a minute…. W-what crackshipper bribed you?? this page looks like they’re about to activate BIG SUCC and tonguetickle each other’s uvulas next, very sus. Noooo Parni gonna be so sick u giving her heartburn with these fanservice frames 😭💔 Justice for Parni she did nothing wrong
Yayyy Chapter 13 incomiiiing, hoping it switches to Riley and not back to the QT Club but I’ll read regardless. Processing the bio reveal… Her personality does fit what the other commenter predicted! i can imagine her smiling with a victory fist as she read hehehhehe. Probably all of us have met this kind of straight woman more than once irl, very nice very darling.
If in some alt dimension I were a storymaker I think I’d leave the development as “her BF gets over it but stays with her and no more headbutting from her, peace and love in the family” (him still outside the frame, just a blank slot of “decent man” that people know but wont see not even knowing what he looks like, at most getting a phone call/text dialogue crumb) cause after all they can meet at his house or some public setting for reunions family parties etc its not the end of the world right??
buuuuut since you like spiking cortisol and seeing our temples recede IF there’s ever a Rissa conflict Arc down the line, what you be crafting would be quite different. It won’t go as far as like Rissa dead/trafficked after moving out with him but still put part of the cast (and us readers) in tension and make everyone beg for relief lol
Parniya’s biggest fan
8 May 2024 10:03 AM
I love this page, women stick with women… especially when they’re being homicidal against men 🙂
AEM
8 May 2024 8:38 PM
Rissa, your mom and sister aren’t judging *you*. They dont want you to get hurt. Shes so young and her life has the shadow of a trauma she may not really remember, so I understand her mentality to move on. But its in itself baked with insecurity and wanting to prove that shes ok.
And if shes dating a doctor he has to be what at least 27 at minimum. They’re both adults but the gap in experience and the power difference with him being a doctor and her a receptionist at the same office is too much.
Even if they didn’t want men in the house most families would be uncomfortable with that.
rand0
10 May 2024 11:40 AM
I have been mulling over the teasers around the lack of Blaire redemption, and I had a thought on what you might be planning based on my own experiences, so, given that “Babygirl” has a crush on her, and there’s a trend of trans women bragging about “converting” people away from a relationship with a same sex or cis partner, my guess is Blaire is there will be a conflict that sparks a relationship between Blaire and “babygirl”, many thoughts many thoughts.
Also I only JUST realized when looking over the bios of everyone original names, TIF-fany and TIM-othy, it marks them as the head honchos, doesn’t it? 🤣
Rissa’s bio is now up!
You fought a good fight tho Tina fans, 🫡respect!! You’ll be seeing her next week with the final page of Ch12!
EDIT:
I’ve also been made aware of a LB Fan Event that’s being organized for next week. Click here for more info about participating (as i understand there’s anonymous submission options as well!)
Oh dear… I feel bad for Rissa. I’m not at all pleased with how the boyfriend is in a position of power over her at work, but I can also totally understand her own feelings, her desire for autonomy, and her want to move on from the horrible stuff that happened to the family.
Shez and Meriam both being attracted to women and therefore having options who aren’t shitty men is an extra level of frustration, too – “Romance for me but not for thee” is going to be a hard sell.
Much happier to see this page, though! Shez is so cool, and I love how much she and Jaden cherish and support each other.
NOW KISS
I love that Shez’s silhouette here kinda echoes the image of teenage Shez when she first decides she has to kill Chris…the unwavering commitment to completely justified murder ❤️
Man, Rissa’s profile… It’s crazy how women do have the actions of men define them. Like… the no men allowed rule isn’t a reflection on you and your past, girl. It’s a reflection on the behaviors and actions of men— you’re not responsible for that.
But also yeah @ him being in a position of power over her, and the dark irony of her insisting he’s different from Chr*s while him… literally being like him, lol. Her in a lower paying/skilled job and him having a literal job with sway over her. Fucked!!
But also oh Shez… this makes me so sad. 😔 My dark fear theory is that the story will split in conflict, and Yonique and her staff will be taking action to try to help Shez and her family be safe from/deal with the moid, while the “QTs” are trying to get Yonique shut down for being “exclusionary” as a parallel to the women’s shelters that have gone through that irl, but maybe i’m wrong (i hope i am,,,,,)
You got a video review about your comic on YouTube by a KenCarsonfan42
If Shez needs an alibi, I’m here for her. Pretty sure Jaden is, too, by that smile.
AND FEED HIM TO CROCS AND/OR DINGOS!
Shez, you have my sword, and my Bow, and my Axe if Chris dare to get oxygen in this comic.
Oh no Shez please be careful.
Love the colours on this page Rusty.
Maybe it’s the horror fan in me but the more homicidal Shez is/sounds the more I love her 😭😭😭💚💚💚🔥😳😳 hmmm I guess the random flame emoji is chris body when shes done with him!
And man I feel for Rissa 🙁 so far the one I’d say is most like the response I’d have. The Just Wanna Move On take, even if she doesnt quite understand her mom’s rule. Baby girl should NOT be with a frickin doctor rn tho she should LITERALLY be at the club. Or learning to use one.
That pure unadulterated rage in Shez’s eyes is so delicious.
YES Ma’am! He better prays you don’t find him!!
And Jaden’s supportive smile 😭She gets it!
Chris’s whole world is gonna be a horror movie once he gets out. I’m all here for Shez hunting Chris down like he’s a walking target. All she needs now is an axe!
Thankfully, Rissa has someone who would be willing to hunt someone down if anyone dares to hurt her family. If that boyfriend does anything shady, it won’t be fun for him lol.
Watch out Chris, even if you get out Shamzey’s gonn–Wait a minute…. W-what crackshipper bribed you?? this page looks like they’re about to activate BIG SUCC and tonguetickle each other’s uvulas next, very sus. Noooo Parni gonna be so sick u giving her heartburn with these fanservice frames 😭💔 Justice for Parni she did nothing wrong
Yayyy Chapter 13 incomiiiing, hoping it switches to Riley and not back to the QT Club but I’ll read regardless. Processing the bio reveal… Her personality does fit what the other commenter predicted! i can imagine her smiling with a victory fist as she read hehehhehe. Probably all of us have met this kind of straight woman more than once irl, very nice very darling.
If in some alt dimension I were a storymaker I think I’d leave the development as “her BF gets over it but stays with her and no more headbutting from her, peace and love in the family” (him still outside the frame, just a blank slot of “decent man” that people know but wont see not even knowing what he looks like, at most getting a phone call/text dialogue crumb) cause after all they can meet at his house or some public setting for reunions family parties etc its not the end of the world right??
buuuuut since you like spiking cortisol and seeing our temples recede IF there’s ever a Rissa conflict Arc down the line, what you be crafting would be quite different. It won’t go as far as like Rissa dead/trafficked after moving out with him but still put part of the cast (and us readers) in tension and make everyone beg for relief lol
I love this page, women stick with women… especially when they’re being homicidal against men 🙂
Rissa, your mom and sister aren’t judging *you*. They dont want you to get hurt. Shes so young and her life has the shadow of a trauma she may not really remember, so I understand her mentality to move on. But its in itself baked with insecurity and wanting to prove that shes ok.
And if shes dating a doctor he has to be what at least 27 at minimum. They’re both adults but the gap in experience and the power difference with him being a doctor and her a receptionist at the same office is too much.
Even if they didn’t want men in the house most families would be uncomfortable with that.
I have been mulling over the teasers around the lack of Blaire redemption, and I had a thought on what you might be planning based on my own experiences, so, given that “Babygirl” has a crush on her, and there’s a trend of trans women bragging about “converting” people away from a relationship with a same sex or cis partner, my guess is Blaire is there will be a conflict that sparks a relationship between Blaire and “babygirl”, many thoughts many thoughts.
Also I only JUST realized when looking over the bios of everyone original names, TIF-fany and TIM-othy, it marks them as the head honchos, doesn’t it? 🤣