It breaks my heart to see her beating herself up like this. Poor Riley π
I completely get the women who are frustrated with her, but this is such a good depiction of the paralysing anxiety that comes with this kind of self-policing that I can’t find it in me to feel anything other than hope that she’ll make it out the other end ok. She’s so well-meaning, too! You can really tell that there’s a reasonable thought process in there begging to be let out.
Thank you!
Nailing Riley’s thought process was difficult and took a lot of refining so I’m really happy to see it understood by readers. π₯°π₯°
I also completely understand women who find ber frustrating. Hell, I’ve imbued Riley with many traits *I* find frustrating. But I’m glad you can have empathy for her as well!
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It breaks my heart to see her beating herself up like this. Poor Riley π
I completely get the women who are frustrated with her, but this is such a good depiction of the paralysing anxiety that comes with this kind of self-policing that I can’t find it in me to feel anything other than hope that she’ll make it out the other end ok. She’s so well-meaning, too! You can really tell that there’s a reasonable thought process in there begging to be let out.
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Thank you!
Nailing Riley’s thought process was difficult and took a lot of refining so I’m really happy to see it understood by readers. π₯°π₯°
I also completely understand women who find ber frustrating. Hell, I’ve imbued Riley with many traits *I* find frustrating. But I’m glad you can have empathy for her as well!
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